Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


Everybody has that one TV series, or movie, or book, or even video game, that they love half to death. Some people even have more than one (me, for instance). And I’m sure all of us have had those ideas pop into our head—those brilliant, “what if?” ideas. “What if Jack Sparrow met a rich girl with an attitude who wants to be a pirate?” Or maybe, “What if a new transfer student from America came to Hogwarts and fell for Harry?” Or perhaps, “What if Voldemort had a daughter?”

Before you start writing—stop. Think about what you’re writing, and what your intention is. Is this just something that you’re writing for yourself or your friends—something that will go into your binder so you can pull it out and laugh over it every once in a while? If that’s the case, go right ahead. There’s nothing wrong with a bit of “wish fulfillment” (more on that later). But if you want to put your story on the internet for millions to see—if you want to get great reviews and lots of fan mail—if you want to have a truly original story and a well-rounded original character—then I suggest you take my advice, and think. About. What. You. Are. Writing.

If you are new to writing, or if you are a very young writer, then chances are, you are writing a Mary-Sue. Who knows? I could be totally wrong. Your story could be the most wonderful, engaging story ever written, with lovely characters and all. But you may want to hear what I have to say... just incase.
©2005-2009 ~Protectors-of-Canon
:iconprotectors-of-canon:

Author's Comments

This is the introduction to a series about Mary-Sueism, why people hate it, and how to avoid it. Part One will be up soon. If anyone sees any errors-- especially of the spelling/grammar sort-- please note me with the corrections. I'd be happy to fix it.

(c) to ~EvanDraigan

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icondodger-wolf:
yeah, i agree with you. i dunno how many times i've read some fanfiction and it starts of "Sue was getting up from bed. she got up, not bothering to look into the mirror, she didnt care if her long, flowing, shiny black hair was messy, nither did she care that her golden eyes happend to look over bright. she somtimes wished she didn't have them, so the boys at school would stop fighting over her. she pulled on a shirt that she got on sale at Hot Topic, grabbed her late fathers knife, and headed for school.":fork: or somthing like that yeah. i mean, COME ON YEAH!!! whos like that yeah? (and how come im the only one to comment yeah?) sure, like you said, somtimes ppl (myslef included XD) will throw in some OCs into a story just so we can skrew everything in the plot line up, but were not gunna post it and call it HARD WORK YEA!! that ticks me off, it dose >.< yeah...........
*twitches* to,........mutch.........mary-sue...........talking.........yeah *self destruct* power to the.......what ever we are calling ourselfes these days yeah.....O_- LMAO
oh well, of to part two yeah!! ^-^

--
the differance between ignorance and appathy yeah? i dont know and i couldnt care less.

~~I SPEAK MY MIND, so I MUST be a bitch.~~

if you HATE stero-types, pick one and copy-paste one into your siggie! [link]

Details

January 5, 2005
1.6 KB

Statistics

1
2 [who?]
464 (0 today)
28 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map